I believe that this post was one of my more coherent blog posts recently, but it is far from perfect. Looking back, I feel like I probably could have done a little bit more research in order to find more concrete facts that I would be able to include to further my argument/observations. I have also just realized that these issues are almost identical to those that I believed I was struggling with first semester. As the year has progressed I have also noticed that my favorite posts tend to be written about topics that I feel most strongly about. The one problem with this, is that I often end up focusing more on my opinions on the issues opposed to the factual evidence of the issues themselves.
One other thing that I could change to improve the post, "Fuel Efficiency: Is it Actually Improving?", would be to bring in additional examples. I only discuss the Model T and the 2008 Ford Ranger. There is such diversity in the automobile industry nowadays, using one pick up truck does not really give people an accurate idea of modern cars. Trucks tend to be less fuel efficient than most cars, and now getting up to about forty miles per gallon in a sedan is fairly common. Apart from being somewhat limited in perspective, it is pretty good.
While my blogs have become clearer as the year has progressed, they have also unfortunately been less and less frequent. Looking back at first semester posts, I had many simple proof reading mistakes and similar errors, but I was also blogging more regularly.







